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22 August 2009 @ 11:29 pm
{oneshot} Letter To God  
Letter To God
Author : mizuno_hikaru
Pairing : HayaRyu
Rating : PG15
Beta : piperr0919  
Genre : fluff, maybe. I’m not so sure. With some conseptual matter. And is chibi counted as a genre too ?
Summary : Seven years old Hayato wrote a note to God.
A/N : My first HayaRyu fic ^^ Somehow I remembered HayaRyu pair when I heard Charice Pempengco’s ‘Note To God’. I love her since she’s so talented :D The lyrics are more to world peace, but it crossed on my mind : “ What will children write if their teacher asked them to write a letter to God ? “

Dear God in Heaven,

My name is Yabuki Hayato. I am seven years old.

This is my tenth letter. I rewrote them over and over because I kept writing the wrong spelling and sometimes my handwritting turned messy and became unreadable. Miss Inoe told me to rewrite it again, so I wrote a new letter again.


It’s my teacher, Miss Inoe, who told us to write a letter to God. Oh, that means this letter is for You, am I right ? Please read this letter by yourself. Don’t even let Your angels take a peek ! I want this letter to be a special secret between us.


Miss Inoe told us to write anything we like. She told us to tell You any problems we have, so You could help us to solve them. She also said that we could ask for world peace, something about feeding the hungry ones and stop war somewhere far away from here.


Well, I didn’t want to ask You for something I didn’t even really understand. My friends agreed with me. Take said he want to write You a wish so he could grow bigger and taller. Tsuchi Wait, they also write letters to you so I won’t write about them. You must read their letters to know their own problems, okay!


Ah, and don’t tell Miss Inoe that I strike my sentences, okay God ? I was too lazy to erase them! Just pretend You didn’t see them. Don’t ever, ever tell Miss Inoe about it or she will tell me to rewrite on another blank paper and start the letter all over again.


I won’t tell you about my family. You already know that I have a Dad, a Mom and a younger brother right? I wished for a puppy, but Dad say no Could you tell him to let me have one, pretty pretty pleaseeee ?


Oh, I forgot my real wish. So let me tell You now : it’s about Ryu. Yes, Odagiri Ryu. He is my classmate. He is so cute, and I love him so much. Ryu loves me too, and we often play together. It’s so fun! Sometimes I wish that time would stop flowing so we could be together forever. I want to be with him all the time, but it is impossible since both of us live in different houses.


That’s why I told him that after we got older and become adults, I would marry him. Then we could live together in a big house, along with a puppy !


Ryu hugged me after that, and we made a vow. Yeah, a vow! Not an ordinary promise, but a vow. So we would remember about it no matter what and make it happen in the future.


But when Miss Inoe heard about it, she called us to her office. She scolded us and told that our vow was impossible. She said it wasn’t right and You would hate us because of it. Is it true, God? You would hate me and Ryu because we love each other and vowed that we would marry and live together?


Isn’t it right to marry the one we love and live together so we would live happily ever after? What’s wrong with it? Please tell me, God.


Miss Inoe also scolds us everytime Ryu and I hug each other. She told us not to hug or kiss each other, because both of us were boys and it is a sin if we do that again. She said we shouldn’t love each other, because love is only between a boy and a girl.


Dear God, I’m so confused. Shouldn’t people love each other? Why did Miss Inoe tell us that it’s only allowed between a boy and a girl ? Is it wrong for a boy to love another boy? Tell me why please, God?


I really love Ryu. And Ryu said that he loves me too, he loves me the most. So why can’t we be together? Miss Inoe even moved his chair so far away from mine now, and forbid us to play together. We didn’t listen to her, of course. We would play together when she’s not around. Oh, please make this our secret too. Don’t ever tell her, okay God ?


Dear God, please tell Miss Inoe to let us play together like before? It’s okay if You don’t tell my Dad about the puppy. I am fine with not having it. I will wait until You let me have one. I promise that I will eat less candy too. I will brush my teeth properly. I will wash my face, hands and feet well. I will eat the vegetables I hate too. I won’t complain about them anymore.


So please, God. Please grant me my wish. I only wish for one thing. Just let me and Ryu be together. All I want is him. Only him, only Ryu. Am I so selfish if I asked for him? Am I really a bad boy for loving Ryu? Will you hate me, will you hate us like Miss Inoe said?


Miss Sae said that You are an almighty God. She also said that You are a loving God who love us no matter what, so I believed her. That You would love me and Ryu no matter what.


So please please please God Please bless me with Ryu. Please don’t hate us because both of us are boys and we love each other. Let us marry in the future, so we could live together in a big house and have a puppy together.


Please grant it. And I won’t ask You for anything again.

Okay God? Please please please. I promise I will be a good boy.


Oh, this is the end of my letter. Make sure only you read it. Keep my letter in a safe place, okay God! And don’t tell anyone about the things I wrote! Thanks for reading my letter, God. I love you! Not as much I love Ryu though.



Yabuki Hayato


Current Mood: hungryhungry
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♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥: akame in bedmizuno_hikaru on August 23rd, 2009 03:02 am (UTC)
aw u r first ♥
thanks for the r&c~!!
glad u like it :D
-lhen-: jinjin_yumkamenajin on August 22nd, 2009 05:21 pm (UTC)
it's so sweet
chibi hayato is so cute^^
love this♥
♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥: amaicon akame eatmizuno_hikaru on August 23rd, 2009 03:02 am (UTC)
hehehe thank youuuu :D
glad u love this fic~!! ♥
Camilleorangeteadrop on August 22nd, 2009 05:28 pm (UTC)
Waaah Hayato was such a cute child in this fic ♥
♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥: akame is love~mizuno_hikaru on August 23rd, 2009 03:03 am (UTC)
yes, he is a cute kid ne~

thx 4 the r&c :D
Afrina: Akame go fishingunknown77_77 on August 22nd, 2009 05:31 pm (UTC)
that's cute and sweet too~ :3
♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥: amaicon akame eatmizuno_hikaru on August 23rd, 2009 03:04 am (UTC)
yay~ glad u like it~!!
thx for the r&c ne ♥
carey_chancarey_chan on August 22nd, 2009 07:02 pm (UTC)
oh darling <3 so cute ^^ and I actually could get thedifferents between our cultures too XD here nobody tells us to wash our feet *lol*
♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥: akame by amaiconmizuno_hikaru on August 23rd, 2009 03:06 am (UTC)
LOLZ. thx sophie dear ♥
glad u like this fic~!! :D

my country has a tropic climate, and we often to use sandals. usually we got our feet dirty after we played outside, so we often to told "wash ur hands and feet!" when we got home LOLZZ
(no subject) - carey_chan on August 23rd, 2009 11:43 am (UTC) (Expand)
Lunamoonchild_luna on August 22nd, 2009 07:14 pm (UTC)
This was so cute <3
♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥: fixing hairmizuno_hikaru on August 23rd, 2009 03:07 am (UTC)
Thanks for the r&c :D
glad u like this fic~!!
Kazuya: akame cartoonkazuyachan on August 22nd, 2009 07:17 pm (UTC)
kawaii ;p
quesh chibi hayato
hug yah ;p
that a sweet story ;p
♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥: akame by amaiconmizuno_hikaru on August 23rd, 2009 03:07 am (UTC)
hehehe~ yesh he is so cute ne~~

thx for the r&c ♥
glad u like it~!!
chained_akame: hayaryuchained_akame on August 22nd, 2009 07:40 pm (UTC)
Chibi!HayaRyu!!!!!! I LOVED IT!

They were in love from that age,so cute :D

That really makes me wondering.In my country,they teach us that God loves everyone and wants people to love each other etc. but they say homo relationships are not right :P I'd really love to ask God the same question Hayato asked hehe :)

Thank you for sharing this^^
♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥: akame in bedmizuno_hikaru on August 23rd, 2009 03:14 am (UTC)
hehehe, yesh finally i wrote a hayaryu fic ♥

it's same in my country. they told us that God is a loving God and He loves us equally, no matter what because He is a forgiving God etc. But they judged the homo relationship and labeled it as a sin since they said relationship is only between male and female XDXD

that's why i made haya-chan asked God that questions~
(no subject) - chained_akame on August 23rd, 2009 11:19 am (UTC) (Expand)
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♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥: lonely parkmizuno_hikaru on August 23rd, 2009 03:15 am (UTC)
*melt with you*
glad u like it so much~!! :D
thx 4 the r&c ne ♥
heart_jin_4everheart_jin_4ever on August 23rd, 2009 12:23 am (UTC)
awwww.... that was super sweet.
chibi hayato is so cute. especially when he's just blabbering on and on. it's adorable.
and i love how he's willing to give up the puppy and candy and eat his vegetables just to be with ryu. <3

thanks for sharing this. i enjoyed reading it =]
♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥: eating jinmizuno_hikaru on August 23rd, 2009 03:18 am (UTC)
thank you for the r&c~!! :D
glad u like it.

yes, being a child he couldn't help to keep blabbering LOLZ. and he tried to 'bribe' God, being a good boy so he could be with Ryu.
even he must give up the puppy he really want, to eat less candy and eat the vegetables he hates. he willing to do that. very cute and sweet in adorable way ne?
akameonlyakameonly on August 23rd, 2009 01:18 am (UTC)
*nose feels like wasabi got in it...but really about to sniffle*

wait for it....wait for it...
♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥mizuno_hikaru on August 23rd, 2009 03:19 am (UTC)
thx 4 the r&c :D
diisa_pinkydiisa_pinky on August 23rd, 2009 02:19 am (UTC)
this one is supeeeeeeer CUTE!!!!
no-no hayato is not a bad child XD
you're a super duper CUTE child haya-chan :D
♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥: akame is love~mizuno_hikaru on August 23rd, 2009 03:19 am (UTC)
hehehee thx diisa deaaaarrrr :D
haya-chan is so cute neee~~

glad u like it! ^^
blaue_luciferblaue_lucifer on August 23rd, 2009 03:22 am (UTC)
stupid teacher is a homophobe!! DXXXX

thx for this!
♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥: amaicon akame eatmizuno_hikaru on August 23rd, 2009 05:12 am (UTC)
hehehehe... there are a lot of people like that XDXD
yay glad u like it~!!!
thx 4 the r&c ne ^^
(no subject) - danz8aoi on August 23rd, 2009 04:53 am (UTC) (Expand)
♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥: popeye jin comemizuno_hikaru on August 23rd, 2009 05:15 am (UTC)
ahahahaha 39 ao~~ ^^
chibi hayato is so cute ne ♥
watanabe_jewatanabe_je on August 23rd, 2009 05:52 am (UTC)
sweet and innocent love of Yabuki Hayato...

So much love!!!

thanks for sharing this! (^_^)
♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥: amaicon akame eatmizuno_hikaru on August 23rd, 2009 12:09 pm (UTC)
yes, the leader of gokusen 2's 3D is so cute ne???
glad u like it :D

thx 4 the r&c~~!