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10 April 2009 @ 02:17 am
[drabbles] Real Feelings  
[drabbles] Real Feelings
author : mizuno_hikaru
pairing : akame
rating : PG15
disclaimer : i owned them. not.
summary : drabbles about their feelings.
A/N : un-betaed. I could resist the urge to post them. Second drabble inspired from the changed lyrics of Care : "Rule no sekai de nanika miushinaitatetemo sonna fuu ni sou jibun no hou kara tsunaida te hodokenai you ni...!"


Scent
Akame. Kazuya’s POV



Jin’s scent always reminds him to a radiant sun.
Fresh, held the mixture of faint sweat, sandalwood and citrus; with a tint of soap’s smell. On some occasions, alcohol and cigarettes will take part in the scent too, but it still smelled so nice.

Kazuya opened his eyes, realized that he was alone.
A pang strikes on his heart, the loneliness was too much to bear. He took Jin’s shirt from the hanger; the one Jin uses as outer shirt and accidentally left after their last session of making love.

Kazuya hugged the unwashed material, inhaled the scent and snuggled onto it as he tried to sleep once again.

I need your presence no matter what.



Not Alone
Akame. Jin’s POV



The smoke from his cigarette dances with the wind, traced the air with thin white fog—which disappeared into the darkness. The moon is dimly shines, but it was full moon that night.

Maybe that’s why I became so melancholic this night.

Inhale. Exhale. Inhale. Exhale.
It’s an automatic action for him; his long fingers played with the side of his cigarette, the ashes fell down to the pavement and he smirked, inhale some more and blow the smokes out from his lungs.

It’s bitter. Yet it’s sweet at the same time.
The bitter-sweet sensation made me addicted… just like HIM.


He crossed his legs and stared at the moon, dreaming about the younger man.
He was alone. Yet he didn’t feel lonely.

I’m not alone.

The hidden pinky ring inside his pocket radiated a warm feeling into his body…to his heart.

…with you…I’ll never be alone.
Even it means that we must against the world’s rule… I’ll never let you go. Never.



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Catscarlet_ember on April 10th, 2009 10:31 am (UTC)
**fuuuuuu**

very scenic. my heart seriously flutters as I read this over again and again.
♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥: dazing offmizuno_hikaru on April 10th, 2009 10:48 am (UTC)
thx 4 reading and commenting!!
glad u enjoyed the drabbles ^^
forbiden_pastforbiden_past on April 10th, 2009 10:53 am (UTC)
So good..that all what i can write to explained the feeling i got from read this fic

…with you…I’ll never be alone.
Even it means that we must against the world’s rule… I’ll never let you go. Never.

This is so typical Jin,againts the world rule, only Jin who dare to do this things XD

Thanks for sharing^^
Btw, do you already have official translation of care new lyric?
♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥mizuno_hikaru on April 10th, 2009 11:03 am (UTC)
thanks 4 reading and commenting~!!
ah i love that words, when i got the rough translation of the changed lyrics, i went crazy LOLZ~~

i didn't have the official translation yet, but when i checked the lyrics, it has the same lyrics, just changed the 'in the passing days, i started to lose sight of something' with sth like 'Even it means that we must against the world’s rule… I’ll never let you go (from my side)'

and believe me, the paragraph turned like this :
Even it means that we must against the world’s rule… I’ll never let you go (from my side)
and in that way, from my part, i hope our clasped hands will never be untied.

*dies*
forbiden_pastforbiden_past on April 11th, 2009 12:49 pm (UTC)
No wonder my friend said this song sounded like forbidden love song now XDD Ah, thanks ^^
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♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥: dazing offmizuno_hikaru on April 10th, 2009 11:12 am (UTC)
LOLLZ... manknya sedih bgt yah? gw nyoba situasi di mana kazu bangun malem2 sementara jin lgi gag nginep. *ktawa setan*

nope, it's not at kazuya's porch.
it's a random place, like the empty street by midnight or at jin's own balcony/somewhere else LOLZ.

thx 4 reading and commenting hun ^^
*hugs*
risa_turtlerisa_turtle on April 10th, 2009 12:32 pm (UTC)
nice~
It's just so NICE~ ^^
♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥: dazing offmizuno_hikaru on April 11th, 2009 02:25 am (UTC)
thank you for the r&c ^^
glad u like them~
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♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥mizuno_hikaru on April 11th, 2009 02:26 am (UTC)
*hugs intan back*
thank dear =))
glad u like them~ ♥
Nihonjin.Tensai;;Anjaela♥nihonjin_tensai on April 10th, 2009 03:12 pm (UTC)
hi hi^^

thanks for the drabbles~~~ they're lovely! love the descriptions~

*melts*
♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥mizuno_hikaru on April 11th, 2009 02:26 am (UTC)
thx 4 the r&c ^^
glad u like them~~ ♥
andee: akame rabuannedee08 on April 10th, 2009 03:24 pm (UTC)
these are lovely.
made me feel fuzzy and warm with akame love.
especially jin's pov. ^^
♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥mizuno_hikaru on April 11th, 2009 02:26 am (UTC)
thx 4 the r&c ^^
glad u like them~~ yaaaayyy~ ♥
Pika Pika ぴょん..: akameshapika on April 10th, 2009 05:59 pm (UTC)
AhhHh~~
I felt something in my heart..
So touched!!~~
*sniffs*
Its so beautiful hikaru!!~
:DD
Want more want more!!
*jumping around*
But thanks dear!
Makes my day!
I really miss your fic~~
*give you cookies*
♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥: pose 1mizuno_hikaru on April 11th, 2009 02:28 am (UTC)
*hugs pika*
yay, thx u so much pika~~!!
thx 4 the r&c ne ^^
glad u like them~~
i miss to post my fics too!!

*to post not to write, i always write them but so busy that i couldn't post them XDXD*
jennishijennishi on April 11th, 2009 06:21 am (UTC)
Short but lovely and full of emotions!
♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥mizuno_hikaru on April 12th, 2009 03:13 am (UTC)
thx~!!
glad u like them ^^
curlz87curlz87 on April 11th, 2009 06:38 am (UTC)
lovely ♥♥

♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥mizuno_hikaru on April 12th, 2009 03:14 am (UTC)
thank youuuuu ♥♥♥
Chikachika1611 on April 13th, 2009 07:13 am (UTC)
I felt Akame love... *flails*
♥ ミズノ ヒヵル ♥mizuno_hikaru on April 13th, 2009 08:57 am (UTC)
*flails with u*
akame's love is ♥ ne??
Chikachika1611 on April 18th, 2009 03:52 am (UTC)
Yeah~!! *flails again*